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Monday, 27 June 2016

PROUD WRITING

Proud 
Have you felt proud before?
I felt proud when I came 5th in cross county then a few weeks later I went to zones. The year 6 girls went last and in my race I came 35th and I felt proud because I came 47th last year. 
I raced heaps of really fast people that came out of 1st-6th in cross country like me.
We all went to Murchison park and left after morning tea.
I felt anxious, excited, and happy.
My palms were sweaty and my stomach was tied up into a humongous knot.
And that's when I felt proud.


2 comments:

  1. Well done on coming 5th in cross country and 35th in zones. I like the discriptave words you used. Well done.

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  2. I loved the part were you said
    My palms were sweaty and my stomach was tied up in a humongous knot

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