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Thursday, 31 March 2016

Special place

Special place (home)

I just walk into my special place and I see my cheerful family pouncing around in search to find a hiding place for hide and seek.

The loved T.V flickers through the channels to find something captivating to watch and the fluffy couch wedges you in.

The soft carpet slides though my feet as I glide past. The memorable photos blanket me with happiness, remembering all the happy moments.

Old board games wait patiently for someone to play with them and try to win against them.
That's my special place.

By Lulu


3 comments:

  1. "The loved T.V flickers through the channels to find something captivating to watch and the fluffy couch wedges you in." I love how this line captures the way that many families lay around in the lounge, searching for interesting things to watch on TV. Kiri

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  2. "The soft carpet slides though my feet as I glide past." I really like how you say this it really captivates the reader - Ollie

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  3. Hello

    I really loved the language that you put into this piece of writing.
    Captivating. I like how you put in that word at the end of the sentence nits teas of cutting out, "to find something captivating to watch.
    Your writing reminds me of when we went to our friends house and we went to a field and in the field it had this little hut thing and it's called THE DEN.
    Love it!

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